babayenyen 66M
18 posts
11/15/2006 2:54 am

Last Read:
11/17/2006 11:23 am

Let Us Talk .


You are so anonymous ,
though I think youre voice sounds nice.
You come across as artificial,
just like the tears in your eyes.

I'm a 21st century boy ,
you're a modernistic girl.
Lets sit down and talk about
the merging of two worlds.

Youre attitude is arresting ,
but I find you too forth right.
With a personality thats deep frozen,
like the cold mid-winter ice .

I'm a contemporary boy ,
you're a contemptuous girl.
Lets try and stick together
in this altruistic world.

Youre smile is disengaging ,
orthodontically its too white.
A permanently fixed rictus grin
with teeth that just might bite.

I'm a realistic boy ,
you're a fatalistic girl.
Ten thousand miles apart ,
in this shrinking world.

I would like to get to know you ,
I suppose that is my aim .
Youre body language is alarming ,
it comes across as shame .

I'm a clinically sterile boy ,
you're a surgically enhanced girl.
Let us walk , and let us talk ,
in this futuristic perfect world.

Youre ideology is mesmerising ,
youre ethos is out of bounds .
Theres a definite lack of symmetry
to each side of you now .

I'm a globally interactive boy ,
you're a planetary girl.
Lets dance the Tango together ,
somewhere in this world .

swallowtsui 51F
1431 posts
11/17/2006 12:24 am

By contrast btw the 'boy' and 'girl', you explored the brutal truth of our current world. Gribbing and helpless.

Well written!