aura_2000 50F
164 posts
7/31/2006 6:26 pm

Last Read:
7/18/2010 4:58 am

When I Close My Eyes

When i close my eyes,
i imagine your presence right here with me,
the thought of you being near.

When i close my eyes,
i see you here in front of me
touching your hair as it falls over your face
feeling the creases on your cheeks
your smile consumes me,
your eyes captures my soul
your sweet voice,
echoing through my muddled thoughts.

When i close my eyes,
i’m lost,
imagining your touch,
the way your fingers tremble across my skin
i feel the tenderness of your fingers,
as you take my hand in yours

When i close my eyes,
i feel the warmth of your arms around me,
as you hold me tight,
the softness of your lips against mine

When i close my eyes,
i am there with you,
so so close...

it has been a long while since i wrote my last poem...while looking at my collection of poems, there was one that i really liked and touched me so deeply...and it inspired me to write this...


swallowtsui 51F
1431 posts
7/31/2006 7:49 pm

Yes a big difference btw closing and opeing eyes.

Good observation.