Sunflower569 58F
969 posts
2/3/2006 7:47 am

Last Read:
4/12/2006 1:57 am

When You Fall in Love

When you fall in love,
Don't play with your cheating toys,
Paint your soul with colorful joys,
Let the sun send you a shining crown.

When you fall in love,
Don't put your promise in the wind,
Tone your heart with a cheerful kind,
Let the moon send a winning laurel down.

When you fall in love,
Don't devolve your hands to flying clouds,
Dance your spirit with delightful music loud,
Let the Venus keep the blessing of your love on.


swallowtsui 51F
1431 posts
2/23/2006 7:20 am

The most beautiful and cruel thing is, to fall in love.

Paint, tone, dance w/yr love in heart.


gabriola 83M

4/4/2006 7:44 pm

Meaningless


gabriola 83M

4/7/2006 12:51 am

sunny, Look I haven't done this before but you need to know what people who speak English see.

"Tone your heart with a cheerful kind" kind has no meaning here.

"let the venus..." You would never use "The" before Venus.


gabriola 83M

4/11/2006 11:23 pm

We have a song that does a far better job than this. Find it, and play it. "When I fall in love, it will be completely, for I'll never...." Enjoy!


gabriola 83M

4/11/2006 11:25 pm

Here's another, thank Hammerstein & Kern for this one:

Fish gotta swim, birds gotta fly,
I'm gonna love one man til I die,
Can't help,
Lovin that man o' mine.


gabriola 83M

4/11/2006 11:33 pm

Oh Sunflower, and in one of my self revealing moments, Which I am wont to have from time to time. Particularly when my back is misbehaving when I have a farm to run. And don't forget my "rotting old body", and my great age. Here's from Hammerstein & Kern's "old Man River"

Ah gits weary
An' sick of tryin'
Ah'm tired of livin'
An skeered o' dyin'
But ol' Man River
He jus' keeps rollin' along.

If you haven't heard a good negro bass singing that, then you haven't lived. Take out the classic movie.